**Day Dreams** Chill Ambient vibe beat feedback for feedback

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idk if its what you where going for but alot of the drums sound off beat but the melody you have going is trippy nice stuff
feedback - Chill Piano Filp
 
Xremagx said:
idk if its what you where going for but alot of the drums sound off beat but the melody you have going is trippy nice stuff
feedback - Chill Piano Filp
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smooth beat i would say that maybe adding a sample esp in the change up part, would make this beat a bit more exciting and not too dry keep it up bro
 
Really liked the lead in this one! Very chill man, kind of reminds me of one of those iphone ringtones at some point. Maybe a subtle bass would complete the whole package.

Really cool stuff homie!

Thanks for the feedback :)
 
arvindsg said:
Really liked the lead in this one! Very chill man, kind of reminds me of one of those iphone ringtones at some point. Maybe a subtle bass would complete the whole package.

Really cool stuff homie!

Thanks for the feedback :)
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appreciate the feedback homie!
 
Just listened my g I can tell your on a new path learning and experimenting. The timing is a bit of so it doesn't flow well but I can see the idea. Other than that I have nothing to say I like your sound selection but work on progressing the beat and having it flow from beginning to end. Keep at it homie!
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This track kind of has the Odd Future feel with the vocal snippets and the off beat feel of the drums. Everything sounds off, but still together if that makes sense. Interesting beat.

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the snare placement is really awkward at times. i think the drum sounds are a bit dry and loud relative to the instruments and sound like they came straight outta Lex Luger Drum Pack. the melodies / instrumentation/ sampling / progressions are all strong points, i just feel the drums are letting them down a bit.
 
Very experimental here bro! Check that timing on your metronome, but other than that I like the vibe!
 
The main sound is cool, and I like the pluck sounds, but they aren't always in key or in time with the melody. I like the drums, and I can see where you are going with them, but at times their swing is a bit high and makes the beat stutter so its hard to rap over. The background synth that comes in also isn't always in key. All in all tho, this is a really cool idea, just work on refining it musically.

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This beat is different and more attracting. Something you can actually ride to.
 
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