Dark piano hip-hop instrumental - (F4F)

[Harry62]

I'm looking to better my production methods so please point out what you do not like about the instrumental. I'd prefer negative criticism over positive. As always post your link and I'll criticize your work as well.

The instrumental:

https://soundcloud.com/harry62/may2012-3b-by-harry-62

 

[JayCay]

You got the basis for a killer beat there ! In my opinion, here's what could make it better:
- Add a little pedal to the piano to make it smoother
- Maybe build up some strings progressively in the song to make it more melodic and less repetitive
Other than that the piano and the drums are great !
If you could gimme some feedback on my stuff it'd be great:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...e-feedback/**-f4f-**-sad-hip-hop-beat-447924/