Damon Medek & ZachPayne - Daisy [Future Bass / Pop] (Feedback for feedback)

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Hi all. My friend and I released an album together and I'd like to share one of the songs here with you. He's the singer/songwriter and I'm the producer. Let me know what you think, what we could improve, etc. Any constructive thoughts are appreciated. Of course I'll return the favor and listen to something of yours as well if you leave the link for me. If you like it, please consider following us on your preferred platforms and sharing with others who might enjoy it. Much appreciated, enjoy!

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Damon Medek & ZachPayne - Daisy by Zach Payne | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Daisy (feat. ZachPayne), a song by Damon Medek, ZachPayne on Spotify


ZachPayne:

Youtube: YouTube
Spotify: ZachPayne on Spotify
Bandcamp: http://zachpayne.bandcamp.com
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/zach-payne
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/zachpaynemusic
Twitter: https://twitter.com/ZachPayneMusic
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/zachpaynemusic/


Damon Medek:

Website: http://damonmedek.zohosites.com/
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCSv6CbdlrgBAzCULkaj3Lmw
Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/artist/54WMN8tzDU2dGiFbtNgh7s
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/damon-medek
Tumblr: http://damonmedek.tumblr.com/
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/damonmedek/
 
Sweet! Really like this one. The vocals are good and I like lots of things in the composition! My only suggestion (as someone who loves things to thump) I'd love to hear a version where that kick has a bit more power to it! But that's obviously personal preference.

Nice work mate
 
Your voice is really nice. Drum selections are okay. You may be try different electronic arp-synth with your "acoustical guitar" sounds. Your songwrites is compatible with song.

All the best! Good luck!
 
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That was beautiful :) I really like everything about this song and the vocals sit real nicely in the mix too. This was enjoyable!

Thanks for sharing :)
 
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ya man this song is great. the instruments sound awsome, the melodies are nice, the mix is really great. top notch man good job. I do somewhat agree on the personal opinion of Yellit of wanting more thump in the kick. I havent really mixed with vocals so im really not sure but, it sounded like you sidechained the vocals, so they dipped when he was singing lyrics. Is that a normal thing to do?
 
HngR said:
ya man this song is great. the instruments sound awsome, the melodies are nice, the mix is really great. top notch man good job. I do somewhat agree on the personal opinion of Yellit of wanting more thump in the kick. I havent really mixed with vocals so im really not sure but, it sounded like you sidechained the vocals, so they dipped when he was singing lyrics. Is that a normal thing to do?
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Thanks! I did duck the vocals behind the kick. I'm not sure if it's a "normal" thing to do honestly. I guess when I was mixing I thought it made the kick stick out more without sacrificing the vocals much. Maybe I should have auditioned more kicks to test.
 
ZachPayne said:
Thanks! I did duck the vocals behind the kick. I'm not sure if it's a "normal" thing to do honestly. I guess when I was mixing I thought it made the kick stick out more without sacrificing the vocals much. Maybe I should have auditioned more kicks to test.
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hm ya im not sure either honestly haha. My first guess would be that you dont? maybe so vocals dont get interrupted? but then again maybe you are supposed to and perhaps the threshold was off a little? idk lol. the important thing is that its a killer track :)
 
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