couldnt produce an ***hole 2(rate ma lyrics please)

aakalitkavi

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i just got a call from yo girl and she was furious..<br>
She said we are ****in yo life, and i got curious..<br>
There are bunch of things that we gotta discuss..<br>
If there was a problem you should've directly told us....<br>
Why in the world did you play yourself a sympathy hero<br>
you and yo little ***** sat there and made this a plea show...<br>
She told me things so rotten that my heart couldn't digest...<br>
It hit me like a hammer, and made a hole across ma chest...<br>
I could've taken everything that you had to tell me..
Her phone call was really not needed, who the **** she's thinking is she?..<br>
Her interference has just made the matter tough..
She also mentioned yo suicide stunt, did we really harasse you that much?..<br>
She thinks its her moral obligation now to free you from our clutch...<br>
And your stupid raps about us, she said she has a full paper bunch<br>
i don't really see where this conversation is headed...
If the war is on, so be it..and i know yo the one who lead it....<br>

(chorus, to be constructed)<br><br>

(verse 2)<br>
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hey dad, i am really sorry, didn't see that one coming...<br>
She is just a stupid woman with sporadic thots and habbit of swearin....<br>
Yes we certainly need to debate, talk it off, no doubt we will...<br>
Still, i know i won't be given an option to win, isn't that the usual drill?...<br>
Yo right, yes i should've insulted you first hand...<br>
So that she shouldn't have to do all the clean filtering and...<br>
She ain't a ***** dad, she doesn't even wanna talk to you...<br>
Who's she? Well She's the one who's always been protecting you... <br>
From me, and me from always trying to end my own life...<br>
And our relationship is as healthy as a husband and wife...<br>
And about the suicide stunt that i've always been trying to pull off...<br>
Just like ma dope raps, i do them to feel well, and lay off...<br>
I am sorry and thankful that she just made a hole in yo chest...<br>
You should be thankful too, coz she wasn't even bein at her best...<br>
And the rest of the story is as simple as this..
It was yo son who she spoke for, and the whole drama was his...
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(chorus)<br><br>

(verse 3)<br><br>

i'm glad that you've started finally to show yo true colors...<br>
And this will be the last ****in time we ever converse...<br>
Remember once i uttered in anger that i wished i didn't have you..<br>
I guess now's the right time to accept, that it was the blind truth..<br>
You children will never get what we parents do...<br>
For you and yo wishes we **** our preferences too...
Ya'll are independent now, but when you were a child...<br>
I should've just seen yo talent and thrown you in the wild...<br>
But what we did was took care and we gave you what's vile...<br>
While we left our hopes, dreams and wishes to pile...
In the junk, where there was no one to look at them...<br>
And as a young lad, even i had a bag full of them...
But i had to tug them back in, to give you education...
And then i had to maintain the right amount of motivation...<br>
To keep you going, going forward in the life's race...
I wish i knew back then, that you'd just slap ma face...
You won't ever get to chose what kind of child you need...<br>
I wish i had that chance, or i won't chose an ******* like you indeed...<br>

(chorus)
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(verse 4)<br><br>

greetings dad, i am sorry that we won't ever again be meeting dad...<br>
I feel bad, i've been the same color always, only if you'd have seen me dad...<br>
Don't be sad, you were my hero and everytime you told me ''don't do that!''...<br>
I made sure, that ****ing thing was out of ma life, forever and deleted dad...<br>
We are really grateful you gave us everything that you thought was vile for us...<br>
I also respect yo list of wishes and dreams, that you let pile for us..<br>
But in that process you failed, and our life then was an exile for us...<br>
You have to ****in agree you stole our childhood, and the remainder was torturus...<br>
Off course i can't blame you for the things that you couldn't provide me!...<br>
Afterall, that would've been all you had, i have to agree to that, obviously!...<br>
But who have you the right to burden me with yo wishes that didn't come true..<br>
You ****ed my preferences before i had them, and then you ****ed ma wishes too...<br>
I was only 14 years old dad, when i first got my salary....<br>
And back then, if i wished to have a gaming console, who the **** you think you were to stop me....<br>
**** that dad, now i'm 23, i still don't know what's a ****in PSP....<br>
While our house decor is full of home theatres, LCD'S along with a DVD...<br>
Why can't you see dad, i ain't that mad, i am just trying to figure a few things out...<br>
I aint opposing you, its yo parenthood lecture, that always ****ing makes me shut my mouth...<br>
Hey dad, i beg you please, please, jus clear the fog out..<br>
That i've been living in fo ma whole life, since forever now..<br>
I'm gonna be what i want to be, that's completely my lookout...<br>
Please, just don't ****in ask me, who, when and how..?..<br>
I wanna live free, i wanna sleep free..<br>
I wanna breath free, i wanna talk free....<br>
I wanna live a ****ing life that is shock free, from yo drama that's been ****in my life for free..<br>
 
You're gonna have to start writing to a metronome or something. 16.16.18.25. that's your bar count per verse, without the limitations of a time sig. Tighten it up a little and find a more concise way of expressing yourself.
 
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