this is cool man. i really like all of the original instrumentation. to bring things together I would try adding bass at certain points in the track. a nice acoustic bassline would be perfect, but try out some electric basses or synth basses as well. I would also consider changing up the snare sample (or reducing reverb) on the snare that comes in at the 1:08 mark. It sounds very 'airy' and doesn't really have as much punch as I think you can get. overall, great job, i love seeing non-sample based songs from people on here. keep it up