Not bad. Actually made me start freestyling some. This is structured pretty nicely, I like all the sounds, I like the mix mostly but me personally I would turn that cymbal up some at 1:10 and maybe add another melody type sound to come in at a random spot just to change things up some, like some high piano notes and some smooth strings. Or maybe even pick a spot to take all the melody sounds out and let the bass and snare go solo for a measure or two. The filter on the main sound was a nice touch towards the end.
Let me know what you think about my song
Kaleidoscope