Can A$AP Rocky Murk This Beat? (F4F!)

JJMarfisi

JJMarfisi

Young, Lavi$h, & Talented
What do you think about this beat I produced?
What do you like?
What do you dislike?
What should I improve?

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(Free!) A$AP Rocky Type Beat | "Stacks on Racks" produced by JJ Marfisi


(Free!) A$AP Rocky Type Beat | "Stacks on Racks" produced by JJ Marfisi
 
hey man. havent seen you here in a while. this is a real dope beat man. can def see asap on this track. this beat reminds me of his livelove mixtape. my only criticism is the beat is too long with the melody you chose to go with. it gets a little bit repetitive after the 4 min mark. but i dont think it will matter with an emcee goin at it. overall real good job man.

appreciate it if you could feed me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/new-j-cole-type-beat-f4f-472172/
 
Hey man, good work! i pretty much agree with the dude above in terms of repetitiveness but other than that, good job!
 
Dope sample. Drums are sounding cool. I think the 808/bassline doesn't really fit in with the guitar and can sound a bit discordant at points. Also it's a little overwhelming and could do with some midrange taken out of it. The guitars sound really nice, very livelove. Hats are crisp and give it a nice flow. It does get repetitive but with a rapper on it you probably wouldn't be able to tell. Apart from the bass it's really good, that's the only fault I can find. Good work. Also that video is pretty dope.

Return the feed? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...s-style-boom-bap-**f4f**-472206/#post49771118
 
Bass is deep and heavy, but i feel the main melody is a bit repetitive. Let it play for a few bars then do some chops or rearrange it somehow for the next few.

Do one big transition or semi-break thingy there in the middle too, just to create some movement and not let the beat get stale.

I see you like strong 808 beats, so check me out: VERACE - GANG$TAS
 
YWM said:
hey man. havent seen you here in a while. this is a real dope beat man. can def see asap on this track. this beat reminds me of his livelove mixtape. my only criticism is the beat is too long with the melody you chose to go with. it gets a little bit repetitive after the 4 min mark. but i dont think it will matter with an emcee goin at it. overall real good job man.

appreciate it if you could feed me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/new-j-cole-type-beat-f4f-472172/
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Thank you. I wanted to keep a repetitive this time.
 
LUPN said:
Dope sample. Drums are sounding cool. I think the 808/bassline doesn't really fit in with the guitar and can sound a bit discordant at points. Also it's a little overwhelming and could do with some midrange taken out of it. The guitars sound really nice, very livelove. Hats are crisp and give it a nice flow. It does get repetitive but with a rapper on it you probably wouldn't be able to tell. Apart from the bass it's really good, that's the only fault I can find. Good work. Also that video is pretty dope.

Return the feed? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...s-style-boom-bap-**f4f**-472206/#post49771118
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Thank you for the criticism. I agree after listening, the bass should have some mid-range taken out.
 
Keez2040 said:
Wow.. That's all I can really say honestly man. This is the definition of a banger in my opinion. Very ****ing nice, you got talent my man and im following you on soundcloud. Keep it up.

Check my stuff out if you will.

https://soundcloud.com/flip-keez
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Thank you very much! :)
Your beats need to be mixed a little better but that's nothing that YouTube and Google cannot solve. Keep it up!
Hit me up on SoundCloud.
 
Verace said:
Bass is deep and heavy, but i feel the main melody is a bit repetitive. Let it play for a few bars then do some chops or rearrange it somehow for the next few.

Do one big transition or semi-break thingy there in the middle too, just to create some movement and not let the beat get stale.

I see you like strong 808 beats, so check me out: VERACE - GANG$TAS
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Thank you, man.
 
Nice start! it really moves man! changed up right when i thought it should. I might pull back that synth a bit over the first verse and put it in in a later one. Also at some point i would have let the HH's run to make it feel picked up a bit. Great work here man keep it up
 
kdanger said:
Nice start! it really moves man! changed up right when i thought it should. I might pull back that synth a bit over the first verse and put it in in a later one. Also at some point i would have let the HH's run to make it feel picked up a bit. Great work here man keep it up
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Thanks for the feedback.
 
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Dope beat! I like that sample and that hard kickin 808.
The fader effect is nice too.
Mix sounds clean to me.
Keep it up and thx for your tips!
 
Definitely some LIVE.LOVE.ASAP stuff here!
Loving the chill sample as well.

Only thing id say is the bass seems a bit too overpowering.
Other than that i could definitely here ASAP Rocky or Ferg on this, Maybe even Schoolboy Q!
 
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