Beginner Producer wants opinion about song

[Vangou]

been a singer for a quiet a while and I've dipped my feet into making my first own song. From scratch.

Instruments were generated using Cubase, mixing and mastering as well as vocals with adobe audition. I'd like to know if, from atechnical standpoint, this qualifies as a song. It's not so much about the style and the musical choice what I am asking here although I am always open to criticism.

It's alternative rock if that's of any importance.

Thanks for everyone that takes the time to listen to the song, Have a nice day guys!

Song -> Selma Soul by Vangou

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AkVae2FIOR5uhmt5DmCJN3S8XtcIuwLs/view?usp=sharing

 

[Vargo Productions]

Interesting concept, my guy. If I could make a recommendation... Don't hesitate to take advantage of the stereo field. By adding some panning and stereo imaging, you may find that your songs really "open up", if that makes sense.

Keep up the good work, and welcome to the world of music production! I've been with Capitol Records for more than a decade. If you have any questions, I'll be happy to answer them.