The intro reeled me into the beat. This was good due to the fact that it gave the impression that the beat was gonna bang. Im not a producer or make beats by any stretch, im actually a rapper, but here's my critique: Cool theme and feel, sounds like somethin that would go hard. The breakdowns and buildups are complimentary and well done. The whole beat together though just doesnt "hit" me like i would want it to. I would advice to use "better" sounds to replace the sounds that work and eliminate the ones that dont work. Sounds maybe too layered for me. A simple yet effective beat is better than a layered one that doesnt sound good. thats just my honest 2 cents. keep grindin and workin!