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Hey guys, new here. This is the first track I've made like this, let me know what you think! All feedback returned, of course.
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mmm. this is some really solid production. i am liking the beat and you have a good sense of rhythm, although i suggest lowing the head of the kicks a little so your mix will be a lot more flat and nice
oh, and raise the bass levels a bit if you can fit some room in the EQ
it's a great track, but even if it's ambient, trap has got to be bumpin'
Those vocal samples are hitting the spot. Just wish it hit harder. other than that good job
This was beautiful! I wudnt call this trap.. Probably why I enjoyed it lol.. I have nothing much to say about this track really cos I liked how u structured n developed this track.. It was just really nice to listen to.. N tks for ur feedback
This track is really cool man! Two suggestions: First, as others have said, that kick should hit way harder. I wanna feel that shit! You could also make the tail a little longer so the kicks last a little longer. Overall, I think getting that kick to sound huge will make a big difference. You can add some light distortion to it, as well as layer it with the same sample at a few different pitches. Secondly, it might be cool if you had a break in the middle of the song and just did something else for a bit. The main groove is awesome, but if you had a part B with some different chords, it would be even cooler when the main drop came back in. Good job man, I'd love to download it!
This is dope with some hard perc. this would go! Check me out also: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...w-dope-new-skool-beat-who-do-you-hear-440304/
This is a sweet track..
The way you flipped the vocal sample was on.
The way the verse came in with a guitar was unexpected, but awesome.
I feel like you lost alot of frequency space when that guitar gets taken out at the chorus return and feels a little empty(though its really not). Maybe add another sound thats a little low-mid range to keep it fat at that point?
I think your drum choices were good for this type of music, which I would not call "trap"..
Give us a download link, homie, I think some people would cop this....
This is really nice, dude. At 0:47, I really like the change in tone, and slowly fading inward, NICE! These fades help a track feel less "programmed" if you know what I mean. How long you been doing this?
Thanks for the feedback! I actually just started making beats again about a month ago, after finishing going to school for production and recording for two years. Before I went to school, I'd been messing with ableton for about two years, so I guess I've got about four total years under my belt now.