Alternative Hip Hop Producer (honest feedback) - F4F

[FLM]

Good day yall,

I need some opinions on one track I uploaded over a month ago. I was thinking about having a groove with distortion in a cool way where you can drive your car to. Also, can yall picture someone rapping to this? If not, what does it sound like it can be used for instead?

https://soundcloud.com/r-grefen/473rd-creation-2

Thanks

 

[ThreadyBeats]

The bassy synth sound seems to be too far behind the beat or not have enough swing in it. I like the bells and horn but the synth needs to be turned much lower, the bells and the horn are gorgeous, let them shine.

Feedback appreciated here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eats-f4f-your-money-back-482422/#post49821532

 

[FLM]

Thanx. I've always felt a certain way about this track because I wanted to make it unique and right. I adjusted it.

https://soundcloud.com/r-grefen/473rd-creation-3

I also gave feedback on your other track.

 

[ThaPhantaztk4]

Your stuff is different and I like it

 

[namesi]

This is very different man. I like the gritty harsh synth mixed with the clean horns and bells. To be honest I don't know who I could see on this. It really is so out there (in a good way).

Where do you get your sounds from? The brass and woodwind instruments in particular? (If you don't mind sharing)

Also please check out me latest beat and let me know what you think: Beautifully Chilled Sampled Beat (Feed For Feed)

 

[FLM]

@namesi, I use Reason but I got a gang of refills I've gathered over time. I love mutating sounds and distorting them to make something new. I'll review your work a little later.

 

[FLM]

@ThaPhantaztk4 thanks. I'll check your in a bit too.