After 1 year break I'm back making music !

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Bradiyant

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Hi. I took a 1 year break from beat making duo some personal problems, but now I decided to come back this is the beat I made after 1 year. I hope you like it and give me some feedback and tips.

 
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Thank you for advice. No problem man I love more a critique than a compliment

S-Cruz said:
Yo, the drums are slightly off tempo. You gotta snap those notes in places! The drums stand out from the sample a bit too much. The same should be a little louder. Yeah not too much happening in this, you need some more melodic layering. Dont take a break from music, it pays you back in your soul !!! Anyway, sorry for the rough criticism. Check out my track if you can.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...my-best-trap-track-yet-its-bangin-f4f-467138/
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I like the flow of it, just a little off tempo from time to time, but besides that I'm diggin it. Happened to be breaking up when I hit play, so that made me laugh a little haha. Good stuff bro.
 
This is great!! Has so much potential in being a very hype track. Before you bring in the kick and the snare, give a bar right before to take out everything and do something stylistic and creative and different before you bring in the verse. As for the rhythm, there is a type of back beat happening and I like it but at around 56 seconds the beat skips and you should focus on really tightening that up throughout the track. at 1:24 You should definetely bring in a new theme, a different progression or a differrent rhythm and sound design. If this were to be a commercial rap beat, i would speed it up just a little bit, and take away the pitched down vocal sample.

All in All i really like it. It does become repetitive so if you were to change anything it should be the the progression at 1:24... if this song is entirely sample based then just search for a new part in the sample.. something will work out!!
 
Thank you for your advice. I'll give it another try with all of your tips. Thanks again

jaycentury said:
This is great!! Has so much potential in being a very hype track. Before you bring in the kick and the snare, give a bar right before to take out everything and do something stylistic and creative and different before you bring in the verse. As for the rhythm, there is a type of back beat happening and I like it but at around 56 seconds the beat skips and you should focus on really tightening that up throughout the track. at 1:24 You should definetely bring in a new theme, a different progression or a differrent rhythm and sound design. If this were to be a commercial rap beat, i would speed it up just a little bit, and take away the pitched down vocal sample.

All in All i really like it. It does become repetitive so if you were to change anything it should be the the progression at 1:24... if this song is entirely sample based then just search for a new part in the sample.. something will work out!!
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