Given_legend
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Hello, I need some advice on writing lyrics. I play guitar, drums, and bass. Ive just never wrote lyrics. Any advice? My topic is "all the mistakes".
Heyy you finished a song! That's always something to be proud of because I know how hard it is to FINISH songs. so good for you.what you think of this, changed the topic to sadness
Title: Beautiful Souls
Intro:
Have you ever lost anything that meant so much to you?
That oved so much that it tears you down and make you cry?
Those Beautiful Souls that I love so much.
Verse 1:
I miss my girls, those two Beautiful Souls of mine
Every day and every night I think of them
I wake up and I find myself looking at picture of their smiles
At night I miss tucking you in and kissing you goodnight
I knew when my Beautiful Souls were gone so was, she.
(x2)Chorus:
You told me to call, but you never answered
You tell me that I can visit them, but you won’t let me
You say that you care, but you’ve never shown it to me
All I can say is that I tried, and you never answered once
I’ve shown my love for my Beautiful Souls so many times
I’ve shown my love for my beautiful girls so many times
Verse 2
I know they don’t understand but that’s ok
One day I’ll tell them what they need to know
They don’t deserve what they are going through and neither do I
I just know that I did what i could just to keep them happy
All that matters to me in life are my Beautiful Souls
(x2)Chorus 2:
You told me to call, but you never answered
You tell me that I can visit them, but you won’t let me
You say that you care, but you’ve never shown it to me
All I can say is that I tried, and you never answered once
I’ve shown my love for my Beautiful Souls so many times
I’ve shown my love for my beautiful girls so many times
Live your life first go through things listen closely to the rhythm and then describe what it’s giving !Hello, I need some advice on writing lyrics. I play guitar, drums, and bass. Ive just never wrote lyrics. Any advice? My topic is "all the mistakes".
Hey I'm glad you like it Sure you can use it in any way you wish to. It's your lyrics, I just edited it a bit.Wow! I didn't expect that. I agree, I have been reading poetry as well so that's helping me. I really liked how you rewrote the chorus, to be honest. It is what I wanted as well. Just at the time didn't go through my head. I also agree on not doubling the choruses after I've posted and written it as well. May I use it to find more ways to fix the chorus?
Thanks man, I really appreciate all this motivation. I didn't know that my lyrics would be that good, but now I have so much confidence!Good luck, man! This has lots of potential, the lyrics are almost good to go!