I thought this could be a really happy track and I was fooled by the title a little I really liked the vocal part though and I think you can do a lot with it. Also the drum patterns are cool, I think they fit well to such heavy synths. Also the outro is quite cool so I think I would try to go longer with it. On the other hand these type of synths is completely not something I am keen on listening to as well as in some cases the vocal is overwhelming the whole beat and 'covers' the synths, so I would review the volume balance.
If you'd check my tracks and let me know what do you think - that would be much appreciated. If you'd like to share your thoughts, the tracks I created recently are below: Reese Bass & Polish music samples [F4F]
This is a very atmospheric track and I dig it. The singing and instruments blend so well together. Very trippy vibe. Mixed pretty good too. Good job on this. Check me sometime 0hms - Shelter in Place Prod by Retnik Beats F4F 100