Barcker
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8/10
It's a well-refined and well-produced track with clear vocals and a well-placed and well-executed drop, but suffers from the infection of the mainstream, being relatively consistent in terms of melody and structure. I suggest looking into SOPHIE's or Lady Gaga's songs into inspiration on diverging from the mainstream.
It would be a great song if i was listening to it on the shop's speakers whilst getting some carrots and milk, but nothing really sets it apart from the next song on the radio's playlist.
It's a well-refined and well-produced track with clear vocals and a well-placed and well-executed drop, but suffers from the infection of the mainstream, being relatively consistent in terms of melody and structure. I suggest looking into SOPHIE's or Lady Gaga's songs into inspiration on diverging from the mainstream.
It would be a great song if i was listening to it on the shop's speakers whilst getting some carrots and milk, but nothing really sets it apart from the next song on the radio's playlist.
Barcker
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Thank you for your feedback!
Exactly what I have been thinking myself. It was my debute release and this was a track that I wanted to finish althought it’s far from perfect. In the future I’m going to produce more deep/melodic house tracks. Cheers!
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56independent
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Everyone has to start somewhere, i guess. My own debut "release" (i had published many even worse songs earlier; they're all gone now) was horrrible and i'm ashamed i even made such a horrible thing (to be fair, that was in 2019, when i was 12 or 13 years old).
I wish you luck! When it comes to making things, it's better to make a lot of things quickly rather then spending years working on a single thing.
IIRC, there was a study where one group of people were asked to spend a 30 days working on a single clay pot and making it "perfect" and another group was asked to spend 30 days making a pot a day. Both groups were judged and those who made 30 pots a day had higher results on average. Take this as a metaphor for your music.