Where's my Pen - YJ Vasco F4F!!!

yjvasco

yjvasco

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another song i did...still working on two more mixtapes (not sure if this track will make it to any) song done all on my own...need some feedback...F4F as always

 
Good job with the production, the mix is done real well too. I recommend either doubling the vocals on the hook, adding a reverb or turning it up a little bit so that you know its the hook. Keep analyzing your flow and focus on annunciation and the power spoken into your words. I think on this track it will sound better if you put more emphasis on the rhyming words when you spit it. Keep doing your thing fam.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ounds-like-track-off-mixtape-cassette-479781/
 
@24fitman thanks...im glad u mentioned the mix, ive been working on my technique...as for the vocals, i understand what ur saying, esp. the hook...ill look into that, ive checked ur track out before...dope

@quike for sure man thanks, appreciate it...ill check out ur track in a bit
 
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