Rap verse i recorded in hotel f4f

Aye I checked out your beat it was nice, but the progression of the harp sounding synth that hit 3 chords needs to lead into something IMO, even if it is just the notes in reverse order it's mixed hella smooth tho so props man
 
yo man, this sounds good but you need to work on the mix, the vocals are too loud, and maybe you can add some more reverb on the vocals, in combination with the beat it sounds maybe better. and some parts on the vocals are louder than other parts, if you get this on the same volume and you put you're vocal lower on volume it would be a good track. but keep goin' on because i'm diggin' this. keep practicin.

this is my beat, lemme know what you're thinkin' about it. feedback would be great.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-beat-diejon-follow-f4f-free-download-454341/
 
that sampling was hot, ive played with that acapella myself too. I would just say it was to be more hard for me you know?like it sounds like a cotton candy version of clams casino
 
Not bad, keep recording dude. Lacks alittle conviction on the delivery side but you'll nail that with time and the right feedback. Also might be a good idea to layer up some adlibs/ends of lines, but turn it down so low you can just about hear it if you try. This should bulk up the sound of the vocals abit more.

Hope this helps.
Thanks for the feedback.
 
Hey man returning feedback. as others have pointed out the vocals are a little rough but with a proper mix it will sound like a real song. The beat is nice for what genre it is. Good job
 
Hey it's nice what you did man!!! I love the sample!!!! I think you could maybe just tone down the vocals and turn up the volume of the instrumental a litle bit. Your instru is good man, but your vocal just got over the instru too much.And maybe just a little efx on your vocal....to make it just a little more ''magic''!!!!Other than that, I like the vibe and mellowness of the track!


 
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Hey bro if you're ever looking around for some beats check out this up and coming producer at KlimaxProductions.com. His last couple beats are fire! Verse sounded good, needs a little work but dope. !
 
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