NEW SONG, Its up to you BSY F4F

not bad dude keep working hard and perfecting your craft- thanks again for the feed
 
I like that beat. As for your rapping, the lyrics themselves aren't bad but your delivery is in need of work and your flow as well at points. It kinda sounds like you are saying things and are faking the emotion in parts. Try to loosen up a bit, but overall not too bad, keep grinding.
 
thank you for that feed back peps ! its a everyday learning process,, im still looking my style or whatever and thats major in the industry, i really dont want to be about MONEY N BIT**s im just so tired of that ish
 
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