Lattice - New beat idea

[Tritonn]

Aye again, im here this time with a rough draft for an overall track that I thought of yesterday.
Was just trying to get some useful feedback before i fully finish it, and it honestly feels like this could become my strongest beat when it's done properly.

How is it sounding so far? Thanks in advance.

 

[JeSuisKabek]

This got a good structure. The bass sounds a bit muffled I find tho and it's leaking on the rest of the track. I'd go over the eq again to try and make the sounds sharper to really make the song come alive. The intro sounds sharp and clear then the sound gets ''dull''. That's where I'd focus my attention.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...coustic-sound-design-f4f-517452/#post49972638

 

[Thundaa]

Nice fam. I like the main melody. The kicks are a bit too weak here but I know it's only a draft so it's not that important. The bass fits very nicely with the rest of the composition. Little sound peaks here and there (it's only a draft, again). Pretty Decent beat though.

Check out my post again because I reuploaded my beat after some final final mixing lol.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...uth-etc/hard-trap-rap-beat-jungle-f4f-517665/

 

[kayjay748]

The intro is really nice, I like the creative use of different sounds, and that hard edge on the piano punches through the mix nicely. The bass is a bit overwhelming when it comes in - it's quite muddy and could do with tightening up a bit. The vibe of it is really cool though, laidback but kinda dark. There's a lot of different sections as well which I like, keeps you on your toes. Good work man.

Can you check this out in return for me please? Thanks.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...aytoo-f4f-all-good-stuff-517724/#post49973106

 

[Tritonn]

Mixed this and tossed it in my first EP. thanks for the feed