I think the 1/64?-34? HHS are out of place in the song. They're just too repetive. I hear where you going with it tho. I'd change the sample to something else. The break down doesnt work with the song either. Well the samples for the break down don't. I'd change the drum samples for that break down if you decide to keep it. You got some keys going right after that first break down I dig. I think you should have it come in once and that's it then another sound 1 bar later. They do it in dubstep tracks where they use a portion of the sample then a 4 bars later another sample. I think that would be dope. I love where your going tho with it. Love the drums samples and you're style. I'm in to weird different music like that. Very different.