First of all i really like beat visuals, they really go along with the vibe of the track. Melody is dark, spacey, kick stands out and gives the track more depth. Good job
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I really like the melody on this one it's pretty unique. 808 sounds good as well. I don't really have any notes for you this is dope. Keep up the good work. Here's my latest if you get the chance: