The first one is better as it has some volume and clarity. But the kick here feels so low man. Try to pierce this mix with a high distortion drum. It will make it more energetic. It feels kinda low energy now. Add that energy drum and you'll get something awesome. Trust me
The drums need more kick and volume to it as mentioned, enjoyed the track, tripped me out while I was listening to it. Great work! (Loved the random voice samples throughout the track)
The newer one is definitely better, bro. It has more dynamic range and everything seems to have its own place in the mix. Also, the low end is a little more pronounced, which I like. Whatever you did differently, keep doing, it works well for you. Check out my track. https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ll-rap-beat-sometimes-white-obama-f4f-503248/
First link doesn't work anymore but I like the beat.
Not really a style I can give you any advice or tips about but it seems like you're on the right track, keep it up bro!