Im digging the melody it is def something thats catchy. I would work on your mixing some to really make this beat stand out even more. The 808 sounds like it needs some work as far as compression and maybe turned down. While your snare and kick could use some compression too and be turned up but this is definetly some good work homie. Keep it up. Heres my beat for feed: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-music-called-doubts-f4f-499634/#post49903270
The tubular bells that drive the melody here are outstanding. This could be a straight banger street anthem or even club joint with a few tweaks.
I always felt the thing that caused that full body jerk that you were going for with this was the contrast. And it's the thing missing here. I just don't hear much in the treble area to accomplish that. Unless you wrote this for an amplified emcee who's going to have a well-cadenced flow with a higher pitched voice (like a Lil Wayne pitch), I think that part is missing.
With that addition and some added mixing, this is a pure gem.
Wish I would have thought of flipping the bells that way, man. I can't get that out of my head.