1st Beat [F4F]

[Shawn_Gonzilla]

Just got in the game. Let me know what y'all think. F4F
https://soundcloud.com/user-475951069/wheels-on-the-slab

 

[therealage]

Just got in the game. Let me know what y'all think. F4F
https://soundcloud.com/user-475951069/wheels-on-the-slab

not bad for your first beat! I know mine was alot worse!! haha keep grindin man. The drums need improvement but that will come with time and practice. The mix needs better balance as well. But like I said. Judging it for your first beat. Nice job.

 

[Audio Eclectic]

Helluva a lot better then when I attempted my first beat, for trap I would say more punch, bring that kick right up in everyone's face, you will get it and this is one of those things that you can never stop learning and improving unless you don't want to, all in all I have to say nice effort for a rookie, keep up the good work.

 

[holes]

i think the drums could use a different sound personally, maybe a sharper hi hat, a punchier kick and snare too
the strings in the back i think couldve been a bit louder too
it also could use some more variety too

i like the melody, its catchy
the little horn made me chuckle nice little touch there

Do you mind checking out my song too and giving me some feedback?
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-chilled-alternative-hip-hop-beat-f4f-533606/

 

[chopz makes beats]

first beat huh ?? very interesting. a lot better than my first beat yo. this is a dope beat to me

 

[Jacques My Beats]

I feel like the drums could bang a lil more. Like someone else was saying,maybe a different kit. Keep at it!

 

[Bourbon Boy Beats]

Not bad at all for your first beat. For this beat I would fix the mixing and volumes. Other than that I really dig it, man.

Keep practicing and sharpening those skills! #Work

https://soundcloud.com/bourbonboybeatsky

 

[Karhu]

I like it more than my own stuff Keep it going, you got some potential there.

 

[Profet]

Sounds tight. The drums are on point from my perspective, feel like you should have hit it up with some bars tho!

 

[Epsilon-144]

The volume is loud enough, which is good. The ideas are a bit random but its your first beat. You want the music to flow smoothly from part to part, but there's a always room for something completely outside the box. The second part (the main beat without the intro thing) is cool!

here is my latest track. Can you check it out too and let me know what you think? thanks.
https://soundcloud.com/epsilonbeats/its-all-up-to-fate

 

[Shawn_Gonzilla]

The volume is loud enough, which is good. The ideas are a bit random but its your first beat. You want the music to flow smoothly from part to part, but there's a always room for something completely outside the box. The second part (the main beat without the intro thing) is cool!

here is my latest track. Can you check it out too and let me know what you think? thanks.
https://soundcloud.com/epsilonbeats/its-all-up-to-fate

I like the ep in the beginning. Reminds me of an 80s slow jam. Once the beat drops I get more of a MGMT/Ratatat vibe. Electronic isn't my forte,but it was cool.

 

[Ajani Nanabuluku]

Dayum first beat? This definitely has banger potential. Gotta get some different drum sounds that actually hit but other than that, the actual music is fire. Especially that main melody. also loved that car horn you put in there lmao. Build upon this and this'll be heat rocks bruh.

lmk what you think! https://www.futureproducers.com/for...tc/2-joints-my-latest-tape-f4f-always-533666/