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    Latest WIP (F4F!)

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    Ok so i decided to give Adele another try since i was remixing her stuff about 6 months ago when i first started and i dislike everything i did to those songs... lol. But here is the beginning of Rolling In The Deep, take a listen, tell me if you think it's too repetitive (i think it might be.) Let me know some ideas if you have any as well! Thanks!

    Adele - Rolling In The Deep (The Elitist Dubstep WIP) by The Elitist on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
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    Hey Elitist!

    Listened to your WIP, instead of having the vocals jumping in out of nowhere, have a volume or reversal fade in. I also feel like the vocals are off beat, maybe chop it up and only use small snippets of vocals (maybe one saying "never have met you" or something like that, I actually have the acapella of this song too, I just can't thin of any way to remix it so ill just leave it in a folder xD).

    That's all I got, good job though, keep working on it.

    Please check out my newest track/remix, I'd appreciate some constructive criticism.

    https://www.futureproducers.com/foru.../#post49459063

    Thanks man.

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    I like everything but the acapella. it doesnt really work.

    https://www.futureproducers.com/foru...ets-go-415563/
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    Quote Originally Posted by Anthony Avanessian View Post
    Hey Elitist!

    Listened to your WIP, instead of having the vocals jumping in out of nowhere, have a volume or reversal fade in. I also feel like the vocals are off beat, maybe chop it up and only use small snippets of vocals (maybe one saying "never have met you" or something like that, I actually have the acapella of this song too, I just can't thin of any way to remix it so ill just leave it in a folder xD).

    That's all I got, good job though, keep working on it.

    Please check out my newest track/remix, I'd appreciate some constructive criticism.

    https://www.futureproducers.com/foru.../#post49459063

    Thanks man.
    Thanks for the feedback! Listening to yours now =) Also, I was cutting the vocals up a lot already actually, I feel like the acapella is persuading me to take it out, but I really want to keep it in there. Maybe I'll manipulate the rest of the song around it. Idk. Lol.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AllKnoing View Post
    I like everything but the acapella. it doesnt really work.

    https://www.futureproducers.com/foru...ets-go-415563/
    Thanks for the feedback! I'll see what i can do about making it work lol.

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    Oh alright, the thing is, I noticed with your WIP's, is that you have a good beat going, the problem really is in the acapella, it doesn't really fit in with the dubstep, maybe try just making Dubstep instrumentals/beats, instead of adding vocals.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anthony Avanessian View Post
    Oh alright, the thing is, I noticed with your WIP's, is that you have a good beat going, the problem really is in the acapella, it doesn't really fit in with the dubstep, maybe try just making Dubstep instrumentals/beats, instead of adding vocals.
    Yea, i try that sometimes.. but then there is no motivation to actually finish the song, and I have a hard time with music structure on my own. Haha.

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    You should really work on the mix imo. Thats where you have most troubles with. The rest is ok, and yeah, maybe you should of just left it as a beat, remove the acapella and showcase it as a beat. Good luck
    Leave me some feedback too when you have the time https://www.futureproducers.com/foru.../#post49461642
    Thanks!

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    Vocals don't really agree with the instrumental... maybe try softening the vocals?

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