Hip Hop Beat "Secret Lover" F4F

[Triple Eight]

Sup Producers !

Sharing this beat i just made



The mix is done on headphones so maybe some shit is wrong

You tell me

advices are welcome, drop your link if you want a feedback

Peace

 

[johnebolden]

I like where you're going with it, but @ 0:31 I think the transition takes a little too long, and should be brought closer together to flow right (to my ears.)

From then on, the track is flawless and a nice ride, and the mix is solid, good stuff.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ck-field-instrumental-w-hook-100%-f4f-439989/

 

[Triple Eight]

Thanks johnebolden I'm checkin your stuff !

meanwhile bump !

 

[empou]

Love it, very soulful and ambient. Though i will say it headed in a different direction than i predicted from the into you gave it. Sounds pretty dope, maybe throw a bass line in there?

 

[Triple Eight]

I tried the bassline and dumped it because i thought it was too agressive lol

Thanks for the feedback man !

 

[empou]

Yeah man, if you mixed low enough, it might just be enough to give it that extra umph

 

[Triple Eight]

Yeah i try to do that more and more
we'll see ...have to find a proper bass though

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[erb985]

Pretty good i like the concept and chops. Try speeding up the tempo a bit.

 

[BL3]

- Nice flip of the sample -- i would maybe speed up the beat a little just to give it a little bounce?
- I would turn up the kick as well
- I would say try playing your own bassline under the sample -- just to give the whole beat a fuller feel

Definitely a great concept! I can see Kanye use this on Watch The Throne

Please return the favour:

"Scooby Doo" (Big Sean-type Beat) (ALL FEEDBACK RETURNED!)

Thanks!

 

[Urban_TigerAP]

I have to say I agree with the others about needing more base, but as well maybe some stereo enhanced sounds? It still sounds good but not quite to the point that it could stand on its own. I could see this being a real hit though with a few tweaks.