i think the kick is a bit weak, try to find a heavier kick, also lower the volume of the hat a little, keep working brother!
Thanks for the feedback on my post homie
What I like the best about this are all the extra sounds you threw in to make that atmosphere. The cellphone ring got a little repetitive but its at a good level for an mc to rap over so it might not be as noticeable. Also enjoyed the variation you incorporated throughout. I agree with S-beats about the kicks to give the track more punch. Overall good job!
i think the kick is a bit weak, try to find a heavier kick, also lower the volume of the hat a little, keep working brother!
I can definitely hear those two this beat. Make sure you send it in to 'em. Everything is mixed well and you did a good job. Keep hustling!
Mannequins (77 bpm) by Bourbon Boy Beats | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Gude,
I'm diggin that. The kick could bang more and the low-end is a bit muddy, but nothing that can't be fixed. I like that little piano parts you threw in there; adds some spice. Good job!
i agree use a harder kick n this will knock super hard
Hey bro the melodies were definitely good enough but, the percs weren't getting enough love. They seemed to be getting drowned out by too many high frequencies. Keep working hard and your sound will develop.
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Yo this beat is wild. Energy is great homie keep up the fire just dropped a like and subscribed!
The 808 line is pretty good. I do agree that the kicks could have a harder hitting sound with the 808s though. Everything else seems pretty good. Not a bad melody, but could be a little more interesting/memorable.