banterross
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Please give me some feedback about my song. From lyrics, songwriting, delivery, beat, mixing, mastering, producing, etc. Thanks.
I Appreciate it .
God Bless.
I Appreciate it .
God Bless.
The bass is really fucking loud. Entirely too loud for me. And when the hats come in on the second verse, they are way too bright, or loud, ro both.
The vocal delivery is spotty, but that's just something that's going to take time. It's almost like you hesitate on some words, or don't even bother pronouncing them. It makes it really hard to hear some of the words. I think you need to exaggerate how you say every consonant.
Other than that? I really like the direction of this song. I like how the kick is hitting. The sample is great. The instrumental is really creative and I like the arrangement itself. I like that you don't try to rap over the huge chorus part. I think the song structure is great, creative, and weird in a good way. It reminds me of a lot of the newer artists. It reminds me of "Because the internet" and Chance. I think you should also listen to some Gil-Scott Heron. You've got sort of a spoken word style that might be reinforced by listening to him. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnJFhuOWgXg