New Deep House Track feedback is welcome (Jamie xx/ Disclosure inspired)

[AlenK]

So I wanted try test the water of deep house styles and this is something I came up with. The vocal was just a file that i cut, pitched and modified to make it work. There was a bit of inspiration from Jamie XX and Disclosure. And the main synth had a bit of porter inspiration. Tell me what you guys think.

If you like it, visit my soundcloud and give a like or even a repost. It will help a lot.
https://soundcloud.com/lost4evrnevr/you

 

[AlenK]

BUMP for feedback.... anything lol

 

[Rosh]

This is a very well done job mate
Loving percs and the looped voice.
An advice imho: try to split the frequencies making them more clear and use a compressor for the dynamic parts like bass, kick and percs.
Overall a very well done job!

Cheers

 

[AlenK]

This is a very well done job mate
Loving percs and the looped voice.
An advice imho: try to split the frequencies making them more clear and use a compressor for the dynamic parts like bass, kick and percs.
Overall a very well done job!

Cheers

Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback!

Yeah I'm not the best with mastering yet so I'm still learning.

 

[adriangery]

dayuuum! really good track!

the melodies are cool. the pads being used in the background goes really good with the vocal and percussions.
the percussions are also awesome.

PS: if you dont mind, could you please email me the audio clip of the "i need you" vocal part you used? would help me a lot for my productions! my email is geryadrian26@gmail.com

cheers!

 

[OAKUM]

Wow, nice track man!

Really love that intro airy synth and the percussion in the back.
The structure had a nice flow to it as well!

Agree with everyone above,
Great job on this one

 

[AlenK]

dayuuum! really good track!

the melodies are cool. the pads being used in the background goes really good with the vocal and percussions.
the percussions are also awesome.

PS: if you dont mind, could you please email me the audio clip of the "i need you" vocal part you used? would help me a lot for my productions! my email is geryadrian26@gmail.com

cheers!

Ya! I'll e-mail it to you this weekend. Thanks for the feedback!

 

[totta]

hey, i think youve done a great job with the vocals here, love it when it pitches up!

few things i didnt like, the weird perc that sounds around 1:33. That sound stands out to me in a bad way, kinda feels cheap atm. Perhaps switch to a different sound or add some reverb or delay for complexity. Another thing i noticed was that the track feels quite rushed, you should take some time in the middle before the second drop to establish a proper breakdown. House music kinda needs to be a minimum length of 5mins. Try taking another track you like and using it as a template for timing I think you have all the elements here to make a great track though! good work

would appreciate feedback on mine:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-tech-house-track-feedback-wanted-f4f-502400/

 

[Eschatron]

Eww i'm diggin this man! Really well mixed. I love the melodies!

 

[AlenK]

hey, i think youve done a great job with the vocals here, love it when it pitches up!

few things i didnt like, the weird perc that sounds around 1:33. That sound stands out to me in a bad way, kinda feels cheap atm. Perhaps switch to a different sound or add some reverb or delay for complexity. Another thing i noticed was that the track feels quite rushed, you should take some time in the middle before the second drop to establish a proper breakdown. House music kinda needs to be a minimum length of 5mins. Try taking another track you like and using it as a template for timing I think you have all the elements here to make a great track though! good work

would appreciate feedback on mine:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-tech-house-track-feedback-wanted-f4f-502400/

Ya, I was just trying to be a bit different with the percussion, so that explains that lol. And I did make it a bit short, only because i felt like it was getting far too repetitive and somewhat boring.