A lot of cool sounds in the beginning. Kick could be a bit stronger, and you should try to clean up the sub bass a little. The sounds like the one from UOENO. Creative track nice work, I would just work on layering drums and making them a little stronger in your mix.
The instrumentation on this track is nice, the mixture of sounds works really well. The kick needs a little thump, and the sub needs to be mixed a bit as it's a bit overpowering. It's definitely getting there, nice job.