hey man just had a listen. the transition to the hook is real dope man where the drums and snyth come in. i like how you mixed the kicks as well.. gives it more variation and it fits real well with the overall feel for the track. personally i think the bridge carries out for too long. its a nice concept tho. overall very good job on the beat!
there are some parts in this project that feel alone, not really much going besides the lead the 808s and the hihats. add some different elements, maybe a few down & up effects might give it more overall dynamics but keep going! you have a good project in your hands!