Enjoyed the feeling, closed hat playing is interesting, synth's/bells match's well with the proposal vibe. Drop was cool, but think the voice need's a little check on the mixing, it appears loud on my headset. Try introducing some back vocal too to reinforce the rhymes. Some plugins on the voice mastering could improve as well. Hope to help. Could you review this dark underground beat that i made?
Empty intro space was too long for Me personally.
I like how the vocals sounds dry and crispy. I like the flow and rhymes are good too.
I would mix the vocals more with the beat tho.
I enjoyed the chopped vocals, they sound pretty clear and loud. The beat is a little dull and doesn't match the style of lyrics/delivery, hop on some darker shit. Keep doing your thing
Nice track bro. I think the intro could have been a little less since you were bringing in vocals, but thats about it. I would have compressed the vocals a bit more, but that's just a taste. Keep it up fam.