i think the sample or drums is not on time.. gotta fix that.. just rework that.. maybe switch the snare with a snaph and you have something.. but anyway, checkout my new song I put up https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-and-receive-feedback-/rap-chill-rap-boom-bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/slurrty-top-down-produced-slurrty-feed-4-feed-drop-links-513873/?highlight=