In all Honesty i don't agree with Zoo here. Your chops are fine, a bit repetitive, but fine. The Loop works well. The Drums are terrible. I dunno where you got the drum samples but theres a lot leftover on the kick from whatever sample you have. The snares not bad, hats are alright. But the Kick distracts me from the samples. Also this sounds very mechanical. Maybe try adding some swing. Not a bad first effort by any standard, but could use some improvement.