I've been workin on this track some time, but even though i like how it sounds, i feel is really cold, souless, i don't know, llike there's something missing.
Any feedback, hint, advice would be really aprreciated
A nice crash symbol would add too it and maybe beef up the drums and add a bit of reverb. Great track tho i really enjoyed it. Deep and emotion filled. Peace.
I feel that way with alot of my songs, like something is missing. Not gonna lie was expecting a Synth at 0:11 seconds. Sounds like something Lloyd would do to me. I agree beef the drums up (Unless you intend on them being this way for the song.), and you may want to keep a pad in the background to fill up that empty space. But the progression is nice, and I can feel the emotion in this song, How long were you working on it?
I think that if you want to add some warmth there is nothing like some slow strings, or sweeping synths to fill some space in the mix...that's not to say that this sounds bad, but that will def warm it up....As is the vibes are cool!! - Nice little joint....the mix can also take a little work!!
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Thanks for the feddback, I checked and the mixer effects were desactivated xD.
Im thinking about changing the main piano and make the verse melody in guitar even im still not sure about this. (any good guitar vst or sf2?)
Ive been working on this song for around 3 weeks.
This doesnt have synths cause im not the right one to pick pad or synth sounds lol (Any recomendation?)
Ill be checking everybodys links late @ nite, or tomorrow cause right now i just checked the first one
Ok so i left you the wrong feedback lol... my bad... edit
Like the piano melodys... also like when the deeper strings come in... this is in need of a mix badly... with everything mixed/blended better it could have real potential...
nice lil progression, ok , DRUM TEASER cool : ) CLAPS IN STEREO!! interesting. oh the riff goes on! QUITE LIKE WHEN THE VIOLINS SHARE IT!! Personally, NEED SOME DRUMS TO THUMP AND RUMP THOUGH . The piano doesn't need to be QUITE as much? Like all the triplets though, they dont show up enough in hip hop . REALLY want the drumms to pick up though . GOOD WORK MAN! REAL GOOD!
I know this chord progression... it sounds soooooooo familiar. Oh wait, its very similar to "You Got Me - The Roots" !!!
I live that song. Like someone said, I think this could use a better mix. Bring the drum levels up a bit and turn the piano down a bit. The strings come in a bit loud, but I honestly don't care about mixing that much.... its something that will drive you crazy if you pay too much attention to it.
As far as professional feedback, I think you could have done a bit more to change the intensity during the chorus. While pleasing, I think they come in quite abruptly.
Oh and I don't like the offkey part with the harp at the end. Throws off a good song to me.