new REAL GOOD KIDS song with a video. F4F within 24 hours. luvu

[Heavy_Flow]

CHECK THIS OUT! BE thankful there is some positive forces out there. Keep grindin

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sub the kids on YT n they'll hit you back or get attem or twitter. LUVU!

(leave your links!!)

//hvy

 

[MrGui]

Well this is was interesting to hear. I think the message and attitude is in the right direction but the flow and the lyrics need some improvement, i liked the instrumental though. With some improvements it may become a worthy project.

 

[logwood]

Not sure that I would classify this as a kids song, but def a positive message... Overall the vibration was good. I agree that there is lots of room for improvement, but the vibes is still cool - keep doing your thing and connecting with your audience!!

Check us out and leave a comment in the thread over there

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[THE FORT PROCESS]

Positive vibes bro, delivery needs improvement but i feel what youre doing. Peace.

 

[LoSta710]

sup bro, u just need to work on the delivery from what i hear...

 

[mich3000]

Interesting Love the vibe and rhymes got msg. Keep up the good work.

 

[tcole2004]

Pretty much what everyone else has already said. Message is cool, needs some work tho. Stay up bro.

 

[Heavy_Flow]

Dont know how to edit, this isn't a bump though cuz I'm jussabout to crit bunch o tracks. Just sayin

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[LoSta710]

I like the beat, but I dont like the way u delivered ur lyrics tho...

 

[lilmagicz]

Beat is good really relates to your lyrics...

Flow needs a little work keep working on it...
Lyrics are very good tho keep it up

 

[ThaMCPJ]

Beat is nice, But you need to work on your voice, keep your vocals up and stay clear. Work on your flow. Lyrics are okay. But try to put more energy in the song. But keep doing what you do, only work on your delivery.

 

[quike]

I like the positive message in this song I thought the delivery was aight. I disliked that hihat though It annoyed me otherwise i like the beat nice touch on the piano the track is cool something different.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...back/new-beat-burst-all-feed-returned-371615/

 

[IIPercent]

I have nothing that really hasn't been said in this thread already. The instrumental was really good, but as quike said, try a different hat if possible. I was a big fan of that kick though. As far as delivery, you just need to tighten it up a bit and you'll have a great song.

 

[unijen]

Beat definitely fits the lyrics, the vibe fits the message. I feel like you don't put enough energy into your vocals, but my main thought was the delivery could use improvement. I think wherever it is that you're recording vocals could also use some acoustic treatment. Could tighten up the mix a bit too. Still pretty good work, especially the production. Keep at it bruh.

 

[artonius.tsetsuna]

Well this is was interesting to hear. I think the message and attitude is in the right direction but the flow and the lyrics need some improvement, i liked the instrumental though. With some improvements it may become a worthy project.

Took the words right out of my mouth. I really have nothing else to add after that.

Hopefully you can return the favor:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...nd-new-track-will-always-return-favor-371677/

 

[Ace2CWB]

There is nothing i can say that hasn't been said in this thread already... Awesome beat, just work on flowing, and voice.

 

[Ihloo]

Really liked the beat, maybe practice the flow, and like everyone says, change the hihat!, really good beat tho