mustafaonthebeat
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Back with my third track, let me know what you think. All feedback will be returned
the idea is cool but i feel the vocals are a bit overpowering in the mix. the 808s sound hard. some of the vocal chops sound melodically out of key with the instrumentation which sounds a bit strange. drums are very well done.
The beat is dope but I don't fuck with the vocals man, they're too loud in comparison with the beat and they seem kind of random at times. Great concept though very experimental, I respect that kind of stuff when people think outside of the box. Keep workin you might have your own lane there !
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I appreciate the feedback. Your instrumental is very dope man, that instrumental fits in nicely with the drum work. The panning and low pass filter on the sample between verses is cool. The panning in general is well done throughout. Breakdown at the end is interesting. What's the sample here?
Beat itself is flame...definitely has a cool vibe to it that I'm feeling. 808 feels very compact and remains interesting. My only real issue is with the vocals...during the hook? Area especially they're just random and annoying honestly. Once he started rapping for a bit, I actually thought the vocals were even a bit too low personally...his vocals got completely washed out by the beat in my opinion. Some EQing and less effects certainly would help with that.
Again though man, the beat itself I'm definitely a fan of. When you get a chance, check me out please https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/no-losses-new-ambient-type-beat-rap-534555/
Pretty good. Overall pretty good. I think the bass is a little to overpowering and kinda out of tune. I like the little change ups, gives it a unique feel. Keep it up!
Interesting beat.
For me here is too much going on haha.
Its crazy.
Mix sound ok to me.
Nice switch ups.
Keep it up!
Turn down the volume of tags and this is the gem in My opinion.
Perhaps some slight limiter on bass and thats it.
I liked some of the elements you added in the beginning. This was very different being it had a trap feel but had like edm sounds. That arp pad sounds that you keep messing with is dope as fuck. I think you should have layered that and let it follow the melody a bitttt more but still give it its character. I am sure bit would have flowed better than it already did. Good job bro
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