Chorus is good, beat is good too, definitely got a DJ mustard type vibe. First dude who went in was wack tho, even disregarding the lyrics his flow was definitely off at some points lol.
hi, sounds very commercial. i could hear this on the radio (not that i listen to it) i was def feeling the 2nd verse more. The first sounds like a white guy dropping the N bomb and he is reading is lyics...needs moire feeling. keep grindn.
the beat sounds a bit like some old crunk beats, it aint bad not sure if it sounds very today tho (not neccessarily a bad thing though). The rapping could do with some work, the autotune was alright .. Try being less monotone , while also mixing your songs better.. Keep up the grind sir hope to hear more! rTF? pEACCE https://www.futureproducers.com/for...irty-south-etc/success-outss-ft-tells-535287/
I like the beat man, as mentioned above it really captures that clubby DJ Mustard kind of feel. The rappers were on beat as well. Just the overall mixing bothers me, the beat has some clashing frequencies which makes the bass sounds messy and the vocal processing could be a lot better, which is a shame because the second rapper sounded really dope. Overall great song but could be polished a bit more. Great potential right here, interested to hear more.
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