So I Started Rapping... Feed For Feed Drop Links
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Hey bro, I see you're going for the modern style with autotune and all that. It's cool. Doesn't sound bad, just doesn't really grab me, you know what I mean? I think a little tighter flow and more emphasis in delivery would suit this well. Production is straight. Mix sounds pretty clean overall, though vocals might be a tad muddy. Overall good work for just starting out on vocals. Keep learning, keep getting better. Return feed when you get a minute: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...project-lv-aura-natural-selection-f4f-513005/
Energy is right on here it has a good vibe to it. Drums are interesting and so are the sounds you picked. I viben out tho!!
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Hey man, thanks for your feedback on my beat...much appreciated.
This beat is nice, I feel it could do with a bit more instrumentation just to give it a bit more progression but it's tight.
I would def be looking to add a distorted effect to that chorus, make it more faded and ambient...I think that would def hit better...
I would also look at getting your vocal mix right, it doesn't sound that polished to me at all..for your next track I'd also focus on your vocal tones in terms of delivery and pitch. More variety here would be key.
Good job, keep going...!
This is good for starting out lyrically and I think it's very promising over all.
This beat is nice, I feel it could do with a bit more instrumentation just to give it a bit more progression but it's tight.
I would def be looking to add a distorted effect to that chorus, make it more faded and ambient...I think that would def hit better...
I would also look at getting your vocal mix right, it doesn't sound that polished to me at all..for your next track I'd also focus on your vocal tones in terms of delivery and pitch. More variety here would be key.
Good job, keep going...!
This is good for starting out lyrically and I think it's very promising over all.
Ya man for starting out not bad.. But honestly it sounds like you're just talking and not flowing.. When I first started I was the opposite, but I was trying to cram to much in a bar... So I would get off beat..I would suggest to try and not to be like chief keef.. Fetty wap.. Future etc.. Cuz that leaned out sound isn't rapping it just sounds sloppy.. But work on developing you're flow first.. Then worry about syllables and delivery
SwagProductionz
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Not bad for starting out. I like the beat, needs to be turned up a bit though. The lyrics is... boring. Try to mix it up, put some more effort into song writing. The vocals sound weird, record with a better mic and try to add other effects and/or use other techniques for the mix.
Not a bad start tho, just keep recording.
Also, check my beat out and tell me what's wrong with it: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...p-dirty-south-etc/first-trap-beat-f4f-513524/
Not a bad start tho, just keep recording.
Also, check my beat out and tell me what's wrong with it: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...p-dirty-south-etc/first-trap-beat-f4f-513524/