1995 - FREDDIE.PF {f4f}

[freddie1995]

have a listen and tell me what you think!

 

[24FITMAN]

That sample is insane. I would rework the drum line, remove the chalk board tapping thing. Get a pete rock style drum line on there and I think you got a classic.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ounds-like-track-off-mixtape-cassette-479781/

 

[TRK]

I actually like the chalk tapping noise. To me it separates the beat from just another nice sample and gives it a story.

Here's a link to my thread if you'd like to give feedback.
https://soundcloud.com/trk-beats/the-lonely-people

 

[freddie1995]

That sample is insane. I would rework the drum line, remove the chalk board tapping thing. Get a pete rock style drum line on there and I think you got a classic.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ounds-like-track-off-mixtape-cassette-479781/

thanks for the feedback, i might revisit this one later, i'll take your thoughts into consideration

 

[freddie1995]

I actually like the chalk tapping noise. To me it separates the beat from just another nice sample and gives it a story.

Here's a link to my thread if you'd like to give feedback.
https://soundcloud.com/trk-beats/the-lonely-people

thanks man, will check yours out

 

[quike]

24fitman said it! Add different drumline. I like the vinyl crackles nice man

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ck/new-beat-stonger-all-feed-returned-479831/

 

[Nipharu]

Digging this man idk where you got your drum sounds, but try layering them with some older/dirtier drum sounds and could complete the vibe. Sample was really dope and that sound at the end before the outro sample cuts back in is reminds of the 16bit and 8 bit video game and sounds pretty cool too.

Feedback: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-receive-feedback/sampled-beat-f4f-480013/