Young MC Seeking ADVICE on First Song!!!

[Mcmonigal23]

This is my first song i would really appreciate any advice on mixing my vocals or just anything to help me improve!

Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/pufferd/im-the-man

 

[djtylercayne]

Good beat, nice flow. Just needs to catch the ear more with the lyrics

 

[Mcmonigal23]

Good beat, nice flow. Just needs to catch the ear more with the lyrics

thanks man