Youn MC seeking advice!! First song done NEED CRITICISM

[Mcmonigal23]

This is my first track ever so i would really apprecitate some good criticism and advice!

https://soundcloud.com/pufferd/im-the-man

THanks

 

[BassKitten]

pretty good!

 

[primeXample]

Not bad at all for your first track. Keep grindin. What do you use to mix this?

Check out my latest and let me know what you think! Thanks man!
Asher Roth - Pass That Dutch (PrimeXample Productions Remix)

 

[Mcmonigal23]

Not bad at all for your first track. Keep grindin. What do you use to mix this?

Check out my latest and let me know what you think! Thanks man!
Asher Roth - Pass That Dutch (PrimeXample Productions Remix)

Fl studio. Tried other programs but this is the only one im comfortable with!

 

[BeauFoi]

For a first track, really good...it feels to me like the acapella needs to sit a little more within the track, maybe lower them a little more?

Nice one dude

 

[BassCrack]

Good stuff! It would sound better if you annunciated your words a bit more but nicely done.

 

[Mcmonigal23]

Good stuff! It would sound better if you annunciated your words a bit more but nicely done.

Thanks for the feedback.