hey guys new to the site, and love the energy ive been getting. well im a new artist on the rise out the struggle and would like opinions and advice on how you would go about getting your work heard on my new track . thanks https://soundcloud.com/coreyon-sick-witit/tbased-x-gimme-gimme-prod-by-secretereality-godlife
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DK Decadence
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Here is my opinion:
I don't think the flow works with the song at all. Your vocals are so hyped up, and the beat is so relaxing I almost feel like I'm speed balling.
The beat sounds so relaxing why don't you try doing the vocals in a low singing voice. Like Heavenly Father by isaiah rashad. The way he sings/raps the words.
I think that could bring out the beat, which is something you don't want to drown.
I don't think the flow works with the song at all. Your vocals are so hyped up, and the beat is so relaxing I almost feel like I'm speed balling.
The beat sounds so relaxing why don't you try doing the vocals in a low singing voice. Like Heavenly Father by isaiah rashad. The way he sings/raps the words.
I think that could bring out the beat, which is something you don't want to drown.
Thanks i notice you say isaiah u may be a fan of lyricism check this one out one of my best worksHere is my opinion:
I don't think the flow works with the song at all. Your vocals are so hyped up, and the beat is so relaxing I almost feel like I'm speed balling.
The beat sounds so relaxing why don't you try doing the vocals in a low singing voice. Like Heavenly Father by isaiah rashad. The way he sings/raps the words.
I think that could bring out the beat, which is something you don't want to drown.
https://m.soundcloud.com/coreyon-sick-witit/tbased-intoxicated-part-2
DK Decadence
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Yeah! I like intoxicated a lot. You really should experiment with melodies while you're rapping. I bet you could do it! Next time you rap over a song with a chill relaxing tone in the background, sad/relaxing/introspective whatever, you should do a little bit of singing. Doesn't have to be high up, just in the lower keys where you're comfortable and it harmonizes.
I enjoyed the wordplay on this song. The ONLY complaint I have about the song is your flow is the same throughout the whole song. So it gets a little repetitive towards the end.
Other than that I really like it.
I enjoyed the wordplay on this song. The ONLY complaint I have about the song is your flow is the same throughout the whole song. So it gets a little repetitive towards the end.
Other than that I really like it.
Thanks, and thanks for the honest criticism appreciate it alot, ill keep what you said in mindYeah! I like intoxicated a lot. You really should experiment with melodies while you're rapping. I bet you could do it! Next time you rap over a song with a chill relaxing tone in the background, sad/relaxing/introspective whatever, you should do a little bit of singing. Doesn't have to be high up, just in the lower keys where you're comfortable and it harmonizes.
I enjoyed the wordplay on this song. The ONLY complaint I have about the song is your flow is the same throughout the whole song. So it gets a little repetitive towards the end.
Other than that I really like it.
DK Decadence
New member
I think the worst is when people don't give honest criticism. When I first started singing I knew I was a TERRIBLE singer, but everyone else didn't want to hurt my feelings. Which made me kind of mad at everyone for not telling me the truth. I found a few honest people and they are my friends now, cause they know how to be honest.