the intro is way too long and the structure is a bit non-existent, try and formulate the track in such a way that sections are distinct and there is progression between them, this just loops loads. the sounds used are really cool, i like the melody and the bass is very nicely done. the drum patterns flow well and have a good groove to them. the drums are a bit dry tho, could do with some fx and stuff to give them more character.
the thing is i made to beat like that for a reason. Its not the intro its supposed to jus be like a freestyle beat with no chorus. thx for the feedback tho man