The Fast Life

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Berti8501

Berti8501

The one and Only
In an out of Lanes Switching
Man on a Mission
Hitting 3rd Gear, Grinding the Transmission
Im Going So Fast, The Lines Start to Blurrrrr

The Fast Life

Im getting where im going
Where im going I dont know
But Im getting there fast man I aint going slow

The Fast Life

So Fast and so Furious
Got the Pedal to the floor, of my 2 4 zero
Cant tame the beast , its alive in the streets

The Fast Life

Im going so fast, i cant see the grass
If I hit the brakes my heads going through the glass
So I look back, laugh, and hit the gas
My Heart starts to pound, and I hope I dont Crash

The Fast Life

We living for the quarter mile and the back road
The stroll to the ocean and the big car show
The Big All motor or the fast turbo
whatever ya got man, Light up the tires
Burn em to the ground, Man

The Fast Life

Sitting at red light waiting for the drop
And when we hear the Sirens yea we running from the cops
its an all night thing yea you know we wont stop
Cuz we living the Fast Life

If you wanna hear the audio version check out my myspace.

Any feedback appreciated
 
yo ill check the audio when i get home berti, this is a big improvement from older stuff, keep it up
 
different song structure from the usual (feels too short) i'm wondering if this is the complete? otherwise it's cool, i don't know quite were you starting as far as improvement goes but just keep at it bro..
 
i listened to the audio berti, not bad, you got rhythm, your flow sounds like these local dudes in my hometown, they called cashe crop, and they actually just did something with rick ross.

The beat is real creepy too, did you make the beat?

ok i listened to the other tracks too, cockys not bad, but it sounds like you need a producer (not a beat maker)but a producer that could tell you how certain lines should be spit, ya know the rhythm, cuz certain lines sound drawn out.

but yo that do em dirty was on point, you and ya dude on the track, thats def the best song on ya page, i think thats the style you should aim for
 
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Thanks man I appreciate the feedback. I didnt make the beat.... Cocky was kinda thrown together so I wasnt expecting that one to be any good lol... That do em dirty track was from 06 haha..

I am making a mixtape of a bunch of my work... Basically what I am doing is writing songs... Not editing to much on the lyric side and just throwing them together... The Best ones will make the song list the others will get dumped... Im shooting for 10 to 12 tracks by the end of february... The Fast Life will be on there... Cocky wont..
 
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