Sweet water "holy water remix"

[KF!$ch]

Sweet Boyz "K-Fisch" - Sweet Water - YouTube

Check it out tell me what you think please ill return the feed back. Keep in mind this was recorded through a iPhone, the way its done is by playing the beat through my phone using an aux chord in a Silverado 3500. Only reason for that is im at work I have no time for the studio say I lay it down in one session.

 

[Stanzah]

IMO could of been mixed down alot better or recorded with a better mic i'd assume. That'll come in due time, just keep recording.
One thing i noticed you guys had alot of gaps in your flow, not necessarily a bad thing but some of them sounded slightly awkward. Might be the absence of adlibs too.

Keep at it guys.
Thanks for the Feedback.

 

[Deleted member 466072]

Yo you had some decent bars man, but it's obvious a better mic would help. Id say if you cant go to a studio (like me) use a good quality usb mic, it improves a lot with not much cost. Other than that man, keep on doing what you do.

If you could leave feedback to my song, thatd be dope.

PVRRP GYXD - KXLLVZ