Something I made F4F

[QuezRoe]

It's something that was on my computer before it crashed about a month ago, probably one of my better beats though.
Any kind of comments, opinions, anything really would be great.
I mix my own music, and I'm eventually just trying to produce for myself.
The goal is to shadow someone or get an internship, so any help in that regard would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks for taking the time to listen.

 

[Ultra L-Oh]

The drums need work. Great BD. The percussion is missing something however. Also, you need to brush up on your mixing. But don't fret. You'll get there.

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Thanks

 

[SwagProductionz]

intro or whatever you had going on is too long.. you need more interesting sounds.. i was waiting for the drop to happen and it never really came in .. but work on sound choice the beat isn't bad but i feeel this woulda been dope years ago feel me.. But anyway come check out my beatmaking video and west coast beat > https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-feed-4-feed-drop-links-472378/#post49771994 .. i've produced for soulja boy and honey cocaine among others and be sure to follow me on twitter https://www.twitter.com/cocaineaudio

 

[Donta Black]

Yea, im waiting on the drop which was a lil too long to wait and a better sound selection overall in percussion and sounds, you got the sequencing down but you need to brush up on the other aspects of music production, the beat has potential so keep at it, or keep that in mind for you next project. Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...official-video-100%-feedback-returned-473571/

 

[namesi]

Agree. Cut the intro down a bit and add a little more to the drums (Closed Hats, better snare, other percussion). I really like that big synth though. Keep it up man.

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[QuezRoe]

What's BD? haha.
Thanks though really appreciate it.

The drums need work. Great BD. The percussion is missing something however. Also, you need to brush up on your mixing. But don't fret. You'll get there.

Please add feedback to my song here.

Thanks

 

[QuezRoe]

I'm known for the long intros, so I'm aware of that problem lol.
I would have done so much more to this beat, but, my computer crashed & I've lost it.
I actually wanted to limit the percussion on this beat. Make the focus that drum, and synth.
Then bring snares in for the chorus-ish section. Idk, trying some new shit.
Thanks for all the feedback though.