Sounds ok clean and crisp. I kept thinking a monster kick and 808 was going to drop but it never did. Also the lack of a good bass line make the track seem flat. I would say this is a working process. I like the concept but it just needs more to it. Super Clean though
At the same time I loving that grieving track on your profile.
I really like this, that organ fits very nicely. I like the swing your drums have. Very clean mix too. Check out my beats here: https://soundcloud.com/team-machine