ADAndrea91
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I just started writing rhymes and recorded this. Quality isn't great because I have no mic and used my phone, but I'm working on my skills and want to hear some feedback on the lyrics, song and flow
https://soundcloud.com/andrew-dandrea/things-i-seen
LYRICS:
Hook:
Just know your not alone and you have to fight
Heroin kills dog so kick tonight
Verse:
I dont know how to live my life, living wrong
All I did was put needles in my arms
How we are, is so ****ed up
I tick till my time is up, self destruct
Than I go back to pick up
Thats a cycle dog, yah thats violent dog
kind of sort a like a slit wrist, I hide my scars
And I promise not here to sing a sad song
Im here to give hope to those trying to get it off
get it off your chest stop living lies
yah lifes a ***** and than you die
but would you rather roll the dice
Using end up losing life
Every time you use the devils there
By your side pushing you
So draw the line
Thanks!
https://soundcloud.com/andrew-dandrea/things-i-seen
LYRICS:
Hook:
Just know your not alone and you have to fight
Heroin kills dog so kick tonight
Verse:
I dont know how to live my life, living wrong
All I did was put needles in my arms
How we are, is so ****ed up
I tick till my time is up, self destruct
Than I go back to pick up
Thats a cycle dog, yah thats violent dog
kind of sort a like a slit wrist, I hide my scars
And I promise not here to sing a sad song
Im here to give hope to those trying to get it off
get it off your chest stop living lies
yah lifes a ***** and than you die
but would you rather roll the dice
Using end up losing life
Every time you use the devils there
By your side pushing you
So draw the line
Thanks!
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