Real Dancehall??

[djnate2]

Me and some friends have been putting hip hop and dance hall flavors together since we have both at our disposal. My question is what do the real Dance hall fans think, would
Anyone here classify this as real dance hall or at least good dance hall ? If not do you like it? Saleable?

Real Dancehall

 

[xtraclip.com]

I personally wouldnt classify it as dancehall. The flow is kind of off and the lirics dont really catch me. Just my two cent so take it for what its worth. Not a GOD damn thing! Keep doing ya thang!
Bless!

 

[Mr. G]

not real dancehall.

lyrics need serious upgrades.

beats need more originality - and the ones that are original need to be less annoying.

JMO, of course...